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All Comments on 'It Started with a Prom Date'

by chaele

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300bowler300300bowler300almost 7 years ago
HOT START

GOT MY JUICES FLOWING, JUST WISH IT WAS A LITTLE LONGER, HOPE YOU HAVE MORE PLANNED FOR THEM...! BETTY jo xoxo

t_i_n_at_i_n_aalmost 7 years ago
Please

Get an editor to clean up the syntax. Good start of a story line but just hard to read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Unreadable

Get an editor!! At the very least try proof reading out loud each word. Just the first couple of paragraphs, if you call them that, were so disjointed with errors to make this unreadable. Better luck next time. 1.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Did you bother to proof read this mess?

At least TRY and get the technical parts of writing straight. This was awful.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Was this a quicky

The other story you wrote was better to read than this one. Were you in a hurry. Had you to get a deadline or something. It looked like a quicky. Better luck next time

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