All Comments on 'It Starts With A Fall (Chicago #01)'

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M3Rover over 1 year ago

We’ll written and sexy. I have trouble with the whole 1st person perspective but I still enjoyed.

philly7233 about 1 year ago

Loved this story….very detailed and well written! …and can’t wait to read the sequels :-)

Anonymous9 months ago

I ope she meets him on Oak Street or at The Drake!

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