by Erodin
Befre you publish anything please find someone to correct all your spelling and grammar mistakes.
If people are going to criticize, at least have the curtesy (or is that courage?) of using your user name instead of hiding behind the anonymous tag. seriously? I gave this story a low rating mostly because it looked as if English didn't even qualify as a second language and the author thought it was okay to publish without seeking an editor or proofreader. However, the idea behind the story would have made a great idea for a bigger more in-depth story. This was nothing more than a brainstormed thought that wasn't elaborated on. Why do I feel like I said the same thing two different ways?
Considering how much I love latex stories I hope this author would consider reposting this story after fixing it and maybe writing others with the latex genre.
Great comments. The story is updated today with a dozen of story line fixes, added an intense ending and some grammars. Parts of Tamagotchi still lives here, though the story is better connected. Anyone that like the story, feel for send me a PM to help correct.