All Comments on 'It Was Fate Ch. 03'

LOVE IT! lol I loved this. I liked your previous story 'fate' but I think this is better and I can't wait for the next chapter :) I hope it comes quicker? Please?

Great job on this! :)

i really liked this story although i didnt read the original i like how you brought this story together and as much as iam anticipating another chapter take your time quality over quantity u know? :) but i will definetly be watching for the next chapter iam offically your biggest fan now

I have to say I like this version better its a lot teaser to follow and it makes more sense

I've been waiting for this chapter! I did like Fate, but I have to say that I LOVE It Was Fate. Your writing has improved, it's just drawing me in. Hope to hear more soon. :)

longer chapters but other than that it was great

So far it is a great story but there are some grammatical errors that have been made as well as some word choice issues that take away from the fluency of the story, work on that a little and the story with be that much better..:)

It would be a good story if not for basic grammar and spelling mistakes. Work on it!