All Comments on 'It was in the Cards Pt. 03'

I feel "shorted" with this chapter, certainly didn't play out like the lead in indicated. Magic aside, hard to believe this level of intimacy and no greater physical connection or growing affection. You might want to explain it in the next chapter or expand their relationship - either way makes sense. 5* but starting to slip a bit...

Not going to complain about it being short just going to request next chapter soon.

Honestly I'm kinda glad it ended there though. I'm not actually looking foward to him getting his "just deserts". I'm actually hoping he keeps winning. That's just my opinion tho.

It was short, bit I don't think that was necessarily a bad thing. Given how things have been escalating with his sister, it doesn't seem like him losing would result in anything too bad anyway.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Heh, sorry for being misleading with the just desserts thing... It was because he basically had his sisters ass for dessert... I couldn't help myself.

Next chapter is looking to be a lot longer than this one.

Spectacular series, lot's more chapters please

Already loving it, maybe next can have clever word play way to word it so they have to make a baby maybe ;)

Alright, waiting patiently for part 4. Great stuff so far, you've bravely delved into anal incest, which I did you very mixed results. Great job and makes me want to dig out a few different stories that I dropped long ago.

Love this so much, looking forward to what happens next.

Love it! Great use of mind control.

Great story, can't wait for the next one!

6 weeks and you're keeping us still eager to learn what is in store and to be revealed. don't be a tease and feed us one more time! will sis take the upper hand in the card game and have her sweet revenge in her own way? don't make wait till christmas, please.

Finish the story; If you are still alive,

Yes please don't stop here?!!!

More!

Love the series.

Still uncertain about sister’s virgin .

Has she been fucked in her pussy by brothers cock?

Pleas tell.