All Comments on 'It was Just a Kiss'

by TMONY1

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1thaiguy1thaiguy5 months ago

Hope there is more

maddictmaddict5 months ago

How lucky can one guy be, she kissed him and he kissed she. The ending I hoped would happen

janlijanli5 months ago

Very well written, very romantic slow burner

newporter56newporter565 months ago

Great story, hope there is a follow-on

mathur_nkmathur_nk4 months ago
so sara . is mother of her friend ?

so sare is Mother of her friend ? Does the daughter know this when she thanks her father for hosting her ? How will she react when she Comes to know about the christmas events?

Crusader235Crusader2354 months ago

Wonderful mature story. Yes twenty years use a lot, so her better marry her, and knock her up fast. At least when he passes she'll have his children. Five stars, and thank you for it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

30 months ago Tmony1 began posting on this site. The author posts about every two weeks.

The is the authors first story I have read and I was impressed.

The story is essentially an exploration of the emotions of two people as they build a loving relationship.

The author deserves high marks for plot, character development/revelation and presentation.

If you are a fan of the category (mature) you will not want to miss this one. I gave it a five.

The Hoary Cleric

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