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by Slutygirl199
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WomynUvYrDreemzover 4 years agoThis was good. Pretty hot. My only critique is that you switched from past tense to present tense and then back again to past tense. Nothing wrong with going from one to the other--I do it myself--but it's distracting if you then switch back.
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