All Comments on 'It's a Dead Man's World Ch. 05'

This story is fantastic, I'm very happy to see each new chapter.

this story gets better every time i reade it and i will be very sad when it ends but all good things nust come to an end , so keep on writing the way you write.

C

The one difficulty I had with this particular chapter is that while you call them Succubi, you end up describing a traditionally Harpy race. I still gave 5 stars. It's been a good read.

another cliffhanger! luckily the series is complete and i didn't have to wait, omg ;)

Definitely have to keep reading but much as I hate to admit it the sex is starting to overpower the story. While the story does hold together without the sex I'm starting to find myself skimming over the sex scenes because they're getting distracting.