All Comments on 'It's All Right Daddy, Mommy Knows!'

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KlitomaticKlitomaticalmost 2 years ago

Needs more work, you know, like another chapter ,,, or two.

Ilovetophoto68Ilovetophoto68almost 2 years ago

Neat story. Well written. Thanks

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowalmost 2 years ago

A new (to me) twist. Yep.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Interesting premise, different look at an old tale. Not quite sure how I feel about it.

Four stars over all for the story. Kevin.

PS is there more coming?

terborg69terborg69almost 2 years ago

Liked the start and hope there are more chapters to enjoy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I liked the story. The implications of Dr. Zimmerman's couch and the follow-on appointment took it down a notch for me. It might not for others. Still, well-written it was and well-told.

Sparrow69Sparrow69almost 2 years ago

This is a new premises for me at least, which I think is rather rare on this site. I did very much enjoy how you handled the plot, and the surprises. I hope that writing about an additional appointment with the doctor, this means you will continue with this story. The only think I would have done differently was to have a handwritten letter from his wife and daughter confirming the gift.

WyndsofChangeWyndsofChangealmost 2 years ago

This was a wonderful story. It was hot, but also quite sweet. I love that it's a love story. I think you've told the story, and there is no need for any sequels. Personally I'm not a big fan of how people have 18 and 19 chapters, each one more outlandish than the last. On the other hand, if you do decide to add something to the story, I only ask that you keep the love pure, and only between father and daughter. Don't add anyone else to the mix. That would really make it cheap and tawdry.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loved this story. I love when the daughters are the aggressors in these stories and the thought of what the doctor may have planned for Kitten if she’s up for it. Will have to check out your other stories now.

sexymeupsexymeupalmost 2 years ago

do not bring a perverted doctor into story it would ruin what you already wrote

dmallorddmallordalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Sequential Readings:

https://literotica.com/s/its-all-right-daddy-mommy-knows

https://literotica.com/s/wicked-fulfills-a-farm-boys-dream

https://literotica.com/s/clouds-and-rain-an-asian-thing

https://literotica.com/s/tattooed-and-screwed

https://literotica.com/s/wickeds-hospital-drama

https://literotica.com/s/butt-be-careful-what-you-wish-for

https://literotica.com/s/good-bye-my-love

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Keep the story pure love between Daughter and DAD .Do not

allow yourself to ruin a good story by adding this quack to the

mix please.

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