by dmallord
Interesting premise, different look at an old tale. Not quite sure how I feel about it.
Four stars over all for the story. Kevin.
PS is there more coming?
I liked the story. The implications of Dr. Zimmerman's couch and the follow-on appointment took it down a notch for me. It might not for others. Still, well-written it was and well-told.
This is a new premises for me at least, which I think is rather rare on this site. I did very much enjoy how you handled the plot, and the surprises. I hope that writing about an additional appointment with the doctor, this means you will continue with this story. The only think I would have done differently was to have a handwritten letter from his wife and daughter confirming the gift.
This was a wonderful story. It was hot, but also quite sweet. I love that it's a love story. I think you've told the story, and there is no need for any sequels. Personally I'm not a big fan of how people have 18 and 19 chapters, each one more outlandish than the last. On the other hand, if you do decide to add something to the story, I only ask that you keep the love pure, and only between father and daughter. Don't add anyone else to the mix. That would really make it cheap and tawdry.
Loved this story. I love when the daughters are the aggressors in these stories and the thought of what the doctor may have planned for Kitten if she’s up for it. Will have to check out your other stories now.
do not bring a perverted doctor into story it would ruin what you already wrote
Sequential Readings:
https://literotica.com/s/its-all-right-daddy-mommy-knows
https://literotica.com/s/wicked-fulfills-a-farm-boys-dream
https://literotica.com/s/clouds-and-rain-an-asian-thing
https://literotica.com/s/tattooed-and-screwed
https://literotica.com/s/wickeds-hospital-drama
https://literotica.com/s/butt-be-careful-what-you-wish-for
https://literotica.com/s/good-bye-my-love
Keep the story pure love between Daughter and DAD .Do not
allow yourself to ruin a good story by adding this quack to the
mix please.