All Comments on 'It's All Up in the Air Ch. 01'

Hope there is more to this story. They make a good couple.

Great start to what I'm assuming is going to be a slow burn story. Short or long, I love a good romance story. The job interview sequence was brilliant. It was equal parts funny, touching, humiliating and endearing. I would almost guarantee that no female executive type probably appreciated that response from Leslie. lol. My only question is why it took so long for Brett or Steven, to make contact with her after the meeting? I mean Brett obviously thought she was qualified and wanted her to work for him before even meeting her, not counting the flirty situation they had. Why would he just let her go? Keep up the great work.

Cheers

This has the makings of a great story, good dialogue and plot, look forward to reading more!

Great start. Waiting on the edge of my seat for more :)

Waiting for the next installment!

Great story so far. Really well written. I'll have to look for more of your work.

Don`t keep us waiting too long for the next chapter. An enjoyable and entertaining start, keep up the good work.

Very good start, can't wait for the rest of the story.

Well done! This one has me guessing about several storyline trajectories. Finn

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!