All Comments on 'It's Always the Quiet Ones Pt. 02'

I was so excited to see a part 2 and it was even better than the first. Loved it!

Absolutely loved both parts. Well done! Loved that you wrote not only great sex scenes, but also covered the mentality and emotional stuff behind it. Your writing is a gift.

Absolutely great story. like the others commented before me both parts are fantastic.

A rare gem that feels real, that puts into words the struggles that many have and simultaneously provides a very sexy tale.

Thank you for crafting this

Great great story both parts

I’m in awe of this story, there are several things that this couple have done that have either flat out terrified me and or things that are an unequivocal hard no. So very contradictory and yet I’ve loved the whole thing. It comes across as breathtakingly genuine and honest. I’ve even had to ration my reading of these two instalments just to make it last longer.

Just to rub a little salt in the wounds you make writing look incredibly easy.

I know that this story in particular could rest as it is but I don’t think I’m alone in my desire to read more about these people.

Thank you so much for sharing your stories and ideas with us.

Tess (UK)

The premise and execution of this tale are what I call "good modeling," meaning there are reactions, thoughts, and reasoning throughout that people can learn from and emulate. Everyone has anger issues, everyone wonders why they react to stimulus as they do, and most never get a chance to see the outcomes of different choices. Your two characters provide wisdom, insights, and a depth of personal awareness that will help many who seek to learn how to improve their learned behaviors.

Congratulations on this writing, it is a gift to all those who find it.

It's such a real story. I don't know if this is a real story or not. But I will tell you that the story feels like something that could happen in real life. He's an asshole. She's a brat. They both have their own shortcomings but they figure out how to work in their own realm and still be themselves but be together at the end of it. This is right up there with one of my favorites and if you look at my name I have a lot of favorites but I really do need to clean that list out but having said that. This is right up there in my top five. Great story!

My kind of Dom!!

Loved it. So erotic and thrilling. Would love to read a cross over of this and "Ashen Master" ;)

ruined it with the sharing

What a delight! I’m honestly so happy I found this story. Your writing and story-telling are so engaging and heartfelt in addition to being hot as all heck. Can’t wait to read more of your work!

I’m so happy I came across this story! Loved both parts and really felt like I was immersed into Hunter and Shane’s world!

Loved this story couldn’t stop reading the only slight criticism is how fast things went I think it was the 2nd date he fisted her so found that a bit much but it was a great story

THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!

I was looking for inspiration to get rid of my writer’s block that I send my Master daily since is deployed….

You have no idea how much I loved reading!!!! You inspired me for long forgotten things I have written years ago. You no idea how much I loved you stories!🥰

Soooooooooo good. I cried, I laughed, I had so many emotions reading.

Never thought to like a story in this category, but loved it....wish there was more of them, and see where their relationship progress. Thank you. I loved how they fit in each other's lives perfectly and the love and understanding they have for each other, makes you think that there is someone for everyone out there...again many thanks and will continue to read from you submissions

Such an incredible story, and so much to learn and think about! Thank you so much for sharing that vulnerability and honesty.

This was such an amazing story, I fell in love with how you described everything. How you switched between Hunter's and Shane's view was great, helped further the bond and made the story so much better. Will definitely be reading all of your other stories.

Your creation was so delicious I'm sorry it has ended.

Thank you!

I look forward to reading your other works.

Loved every single minute of this story. Your way with developing the characters and their needs 👌🏻❤️

Love this relationship. So cool and I love that you pulled the story writing into it. Thanks.