All Comments on 'It's Good to Have Dreams'

by LePenseur

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Scotsman69Scotsman69over 13 years ago
Delicate and lovely

Thank you.

DanielQSteele1DanielQSteele1over 13 years ago
Beautiful

This is flat out beautiful. It speaks to every what if/what could have been/what might be in life. It's also sad as hell and more painful than that if you've ever been in the narrator's shoes, and most of us have been. It's perfect as is, but any reader has to wonder....does he ever meet her in reality?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
It's good to have dreams?

It's better to have a real life.

LePenseurLePenseurover 13 years agoAuthor
Thanks for reading

Thank you for your time, everyone. It was a fun story to write. I'd like to try a more realistically-themed story sometime, maybe when I've improved my writing chops a little. Until next time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

It's a beatiful story. I n the beginning you can actually feel his lonliness since he is in a new place and hasn't made any friends yet. Then the Sarah dream. It IS good to have dreams. And I hope that he tracks down Sarah and makes the dream a reality.

LunaEroticaMysticaLunaEroticaMysticaover 13 years ago
and everything that WILL be...

*soft sigh* What a gorgeous story! Who hasn't thought back on their past and wondered what might have been? You did a beautiful job getting across this shy, introvert's thoughts and feelings and the wonder of those first experiences (regardless of the reality). This story was like a breath of fresh air - tender and sweet. Even the language had a gentle pace and flow. Goodluck!

~Luna

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I wasn't expecting anything.

I've never seen your work and had no expectations positive or negative, but I loved this story! As others have said it catches the feelings I had in those years. Brings back memories that I enjoy more now, than I did then. I hope you do produce more of this quality. Thank You. Greg

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