All Comments on 'It's Just Magic Pt. 11-12'

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Blacksword404Blacksword4045 months ago

Keep it coming. I'm liking this story.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

There were a couple of mentions of a "Lisa" that he loved that I think were probably supposed to be Lori. Other than that, loving the story!

dontyouwishyouknewdontyouwishyouknew5 months ago

The main character is rather interesting. Mr Prosecutor, Mr 'We Stand for Justice', makes his living off cheating at poker, lottery fraud and insider trading.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Very good story so far! Pretty likable characters.

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