All Comments on 'It's My Life: Two'

This was funny and hot as well! Look forward to more!!!

Probably not the most constructive of comments, but your story made me incredibly hot, and I would love to shag you senseless.

I'm in love with Rebecca too. A sense of humor is very sexy. Keep going with your story, because I'm lovin' it!

I like the story but the male lead is a self-centered idiot who wnats to justify his swinging. Dump him.

Funny and self-depreciating. A wickedly funny and sexy ride so far. Nice work Becky!

You have a casual style that lends an air of believability to the story. Well done.

The fact that you're relating things that actually happened to you makes it really exiting. Can't wait to read more!

I especially like the line:

"as he idly traced the pebbly perimeter of my aureola."

My best wishes

Becky, I like your style.It's such a shame you fell for a person (he doesn't qualify as a "guy", prick maybe), but your sister was right to qu3estion your sanity. I had thought he was bad enough after I read Ch8, but so far he is the pits. I dont recall Susan being too hard on him, to her discredit. I will read on hoping that you have a better time.