by KinkyKar18
THAT WAS GREAT KEEP OING AND LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU DO PUH-LLLEASE!
I find you can tell this story was written by a female, even though I'm sure it's enjoyable for both genders. It's hot to put it simply, without being overdone or under, the perfect mix of gentle with rough. It also appeals to many types, but seeing most people have multiple preferences it's extra good ;) Thanks again, I hope you keep writing more for this story, my only critism was that it was too short.
I enjoyed this story a lot. I think my favorite part was that one of the guy's knew her secret turn-ons and used it against her. It would have been hot if you had explored that further... Stress her reluctance to the entire situation, and have a longer build-up to her eventual break down as she gives into her involuntary arousal. Anyway, thanks for sharing!
That my dear was by far a thrilling and exhilarating story. Very dramatic and good sense of emotioanal description :D
Keep me informed of when you update it :)
Until right at the end when things got a little too rushed. Nice job overall, though.