All Comments on 'It's Only a Game'

I can't read a story that's being shouted at me.

This is a totally stupid idiot author and the story should be pulled from the site ASAP.

Dear Readers,

I don't know why the middle of the story is in all caps. I did not submit it like that and I will try to get it corrected ASAP (that was me).

Kromen

that was actually an extraordinarily well written story.

But this was a really fun story. My only complaint (which is my usual complaint, lol) is that I wanted more description on the sex. The details of the game were incredible, and very crisp, I would have loved to see that carried into the sexual escapades.

Overall, well written, engaging, and believable. Definitely something for the horny sports fan!

I enjoyed it. You have wonderful, crisp descriptions, which put me right in the apartment and culture, and I envy your ability with dialogue. Not only that, so don't know how you could have added much more to the sex, it felt very 'first time', which was the point. Also, very sad state of affairs when folks have to gig you with zeros because of an obvious, fixable publishing error. Great little story, thanks.

Not a Mets fan. Not a Bosox fan. I am a baseball fan and I remember that game. The details (Vin Scully calling the game and Paul Simon singing the National Anthem) were all there making it more real.

And L is smoking hot.

First of all, I love how you set up the scene. I really had a good sense of what was going on and it made the whole thing more interesting. I don't like baseball but I've fooled around during hockey games and I could completely understand R (strangely enough) but I liked the way L didn't complain about him watching the game. They seemed like a really cute couple and I liked how reading it the sexual tension built just enough to keep it hot, while the distraction of the game made it more real. Keep up the great work! Bianca

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