All Comments on 'It's Only Tea'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
May be True Story

Well told story. Sounds like it could really have happened.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Another adulterous slut is born, since it involves

work a bit of a whore to. What her husband does or does not do is not an excuse for adultry. If she is not happy in her marriage she needs to divorce her husband and go have all the sex she wants. In this case, she betrays and disrects her marriage, her husband, and herself. What do you think Ted really thinks of her? A very easy piece of ass whenever I want it is the answer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
I wonder...

those hate-writers, are cuckolds or something?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Since...

Since authors of this genre ONLY want positive feedback, I can'T comment on this story.

ohioohioalmost 17 years ago
don't let

the readers who type with their hind legs get you down. It's a well-written and enjoyable story. Please continue posting!

ohio

bornagainbornagainalmost 17 years ago
Julie the cheating bitch

Bryn needs to open his eyes and see what kind of wife he married she doesnt care a bit about Bryn or his feelings he should just file for a divorce from her and go for Teds throat .

Atlanta,Ga

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Good story,

Both wives and Husbands can take a lover. The girl's straying is reasonable. Well written.

Good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Oh My, The Comment Nazis Are Out In Force

<p>"Here we go again," as my role model used to say.</p>

<p>This time, people who criticize a story are mutants who "type with their hind legs." They're mocked and derided as cuckolds. Somehow, in some people’s narrow-minded viewpoints, they become more wise and manly than the rest of us peasants when they ridicule other opinions. An elite few out here see themselves as better than the rest of us … apparently by virtue of their aristocratic birth. Sadly, everyone else (anyone who doesn’t care for a story and says so) is deficient in intelligence and a mutant. How stupid it is for those of us who view a story in an unfavorable light to presume we are competent to make remarks about it. No one except the privileged (in their own considered estimation) can possible see the nuances or understand the syllogism in the writer’s story line. Us critics of a story just aren’t quite smart enough and we should just realize that and shut up, is that right? No … I think I’ll just ignore those who place themselves above the rest of us and seek to shut out other opinions.</p>

<p>As for this “story,” it isn’t that well done, and it’s a boring story line that has been done “to death” here on Lit. Character development is weak. In fact, the slut wife is a caricature with wooden emotions (to the extent the “writer” put ANY emotion into the story), and the dialogue is pitiful. If people where this “writer” lives actually speak the way he has his characters doing, that’s a part of the world I want to avoid. The grammar is okay, I guess. Well, it’s marginal, but I’m in a charitable mood. I didn’t find any misspelled words that leaped off the page at me, but I didn’t read it closely either.</p>

<p>As far as content, this “story” is thoroughly repulsive. The slut wife is portrayed as a whore with no personal integrity and a woman with a sociopathic disregard for other human beings. It takes a very special writer to take a character with such low appeal and craft a good story around that character. This “writer” doesn’t have the necessary skills.</p>

<p> This type of “story” just doesn’t cut it with me and I have no problem giving it the lowest possible scores, based on content alone. That is my privilege. As long as the owners of this website allow it, and the “writer” opens his “story” up for commentary, I shall keep on doing it … whether people like Ohio like it or not. </p>

<p>Ron123XYZ@foreveranonymous.naturally</p>

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
.....

while i cant say i liked this story a lot...the plot was believable and plausible...the older boss taking charge of the whole thing...fantastically written...

the wife obviously fell out of love with her husband after the "weekend"...she should have gone for a divorce...but the age of the kids stopped her...these things should have been added to the story...without it the story is incomplete.....

PS...thank god you didnt make the wife feel regret...much better this way...

TLeeTLeealmost 17 years ago
Bullshit

You know this story is a piece of shit when that queer calling itsself ohio likes it. ohio shows how perverted a person can be by the comments made and the piss-poor stories posted on this site. Ignore the comments and avoid the stories written by this obnoxious asseating queer. This story is a waste of time, space, and energy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Grammar issues

I have no problem with the content, but I found a lot of the odd grammar choices and errors made your story tough to read. I'd recommend using an editor in future stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
A Story of Negativity and Selfishness

A selfish married woman who seeks to cuckold her husband just for the sex is just a whore siphoning her room and board off her spouse for the worst of eachs future.<P>

No respect here for the character or the female writer who doesn't understand the reality of life and consequence.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
If Julie weren't married, then would you like it?

Think about this sexy tale. If Julia were single, it would be just as good a story. Good job of allowing us to be inside Julia's mind as she enjoyed the seduction.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Why Not????

If you are going to do something like this, do not do it with an employee because walls have ears and word travels fast. Everyone needs attention and some TLC, husband, wife and children. Normally, men expect TLC from their wife when they do not ask for it. Women on the other hand, have to get mad, beg, cry and sometimes have affairs to get some TLC. If the husband is not taking care of his wife in this department, he is leaving the door wide open for other men to satisfy his wife. This is what is happening here. Not enough communication and her husband is expecting everything to be done his way and for him if he ask for it or not. This is how affairs get started and continue. Then there is a divorce and the wife is usually the one to ask, "why didn't you respect and love me in my time of need as I did yours?" At this point, most men are speechless and their spouse or ex-spouse wins with that simple question.

I liked the story and I hope Ted sees her as often as he can and her husband suffers. She will get use to the love and kindness of Ted and his big cock and she will have little to do with and for her husband.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
just barely escaped a 0

He is fooling around with employees in a manner that will be impossible to defend in court as not being sexual harassment. Are there no other women in the world available to him? If the answer is no, he has lost the case. If the answer is yes, he is an idiot.

<p>

To the comment about whether we would view it as erotic if she were single, that so changes the context it’s impossible to view it that way. How would you view an employee who invented something and gave it to a rival he found attractive? Would you view it differently if he were unemployed? Of course. So what?

<p>

It’s only tea? She knows before their date they’re going for dinner and drinks and to his place for sex. She plans to stay the whole night by dumping the kids. She knows it will be viewed as wrong by her family and husband so she lies. So what is her basis for making all of these premeditated actions acceptable?

<p>

Her husband, sensing she is unhappy, schedules a weekend where she will be pampered. And he succeeds. But, since the one thing she wants is not successful, because she didn’t tell him she wanted that, she has license to do whatever she wants.

<p>

There was no claim of long-term problems in the marriage. There was no discussion of her giving him the slightest clue what she demanded or all loyalty to the marriage was canceled. There was no indication he didn’t try his best to assure she was happy. So she gave him a one-time surprise test. It was so surprising he didn’t know he had taken it even after it was over. To her, failing this test gave her carte blanche.

<p>

I can’t decide which of the two of them is stupider, though I’m not sure it is necessary since each is sufficiently stupid that we don’t care about them at all.

<p>

Her internal “struggles” are so weak it felt like I was reading the slightly edited version of – insert lame struggle type 3a here – instead of something she might actually have felt.

melsdadmelsdadalmost 17 years ago
Wow! what a brilliant effort, please keep writing.

I loved every word of your story; well done, and thank you for taking the time to entertain us. Take absolutely no notice of those who carry on as if these stories are factual. I read them because they're erotic, they arouse me and assist me to fantasise as I masturbate which I still do every other day even at 59,and have since I was a young boy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Arousing story!

Very well written. Ted was such an impressive, cultured and commanding older man. Understand totally how he appealed to the younger woman. Ted had everything her clueless younger husband did not have.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Lonely Wives

While I can honestly say I have been a faithful wife, I know what it is like to be neglected. My husband is good to me don't get me wrong but I miss the passion and desire that is beginning to die out and we've only been married 4 years. We have two small children (2 under 2) so time alone is next to impossible and I really think that as they get older and we get more time together we will be fine, but in the last two years I find myself fantasizing more and more about the passion and excitement in an affair. While I will never act on I just want to say that I completely understand why Julie did. (in the fake story of course.)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
fantasies are normal

acting on those fantasies can and usually does have terrible consequences. to the family (especially children) as well as to the physical health; or both. <p>

people should know themselves: if they can't or don't want to stay committed or mono, they shouldn't marry. if they marry the "wrong" spouse, they should divorce immediately and move on. <p>

to keep having fantasies of how great some guy, or woman, is going to fuck you, talk tenderly to you after fucking you, or just cuddle and tell you how much your eyes have the power to disarm them, etc, etc, etc. is just idiotic. they would do it and could do it only for so long.... but if you fuck such good listeners, considerate person, chances are, without a few month to a few or two and such things won't happen any more,,,, <p>

but once you stray, there is no turning back. <p>

I know of teacher colleague whose wife strayed and went on to marry the other guy, breaking up a family. now the little boy, 4 year old, comes to his father's job once in a while.... It's sad because just a year before that, the teacher was talking about buying a house together, with the wife, and how they're going to do this or that.... <p>

then I saw a young, beautiful young woman, who lived in the complex here for almost two years, going through all the unstable young black men who moved through the complex... she had two different kids, by two different fathers, one white, the other black kids.... <p>

it's very sad once a young person, especially a woman, gets into a certain habit... all those transient big "romantic" black lovers never fulfilled her needs, while her family broken and gone... eventually she moved back to be with her father.... but the daughter who's 8 and who came to see her once in a while was with her father.... <p>

very sad for everyone... people hsould think more iwth their heads than with their vagina and penis,,,,

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 15 years ago
The artfull voice of the narrator

What particularly impressed me in this story was the very delicate line the narrator walked; exploring the point of views of all characters while at the same time -through the careful use of the language, hinting in an ironic way to the short comings, self delusions and ironies which are inevitable in any situation which requires a great deal of pretence and lying (at least to oneself). And yet - the narrator is not directly judging. We could do it if we like, according to our own values. Which reminds us how art conducts itself - unlike propaganda, preaching and so on.

DWornockDWornockalmost 13 years ago
Too much seduction garbage.

The fact is, as soon as she went to his house she intended to fuck.

Of course Ted would never because it would be a big sexual harassment case.

monkcalmmonkcalmalmost 11 years ago
Hmmm a pattern

Ever notice most of the wimp cuckold writers are 50+ male same writing style plot motivates are all similar like either the same person and female or a lot of men past 50 are dick-less cuckolds and they just like sharing their weird life stories. I'm just saying.

impo_61impo_61almost 9 years ago
What the meaning of this?

What the meaning of this? A woman cheating her husband and her children? The boss being the good guy, the guy that didn't mind fucking another man's wife, just because she was his employee? 1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
wtf

She cheats on her family and husband. There is no excuse, another destroyed family by a cheating whore. If she was killed on the way home the better everyone would be. THE END

cyferxcyferxalmost 5 years ago
Condom?

I know you are probably not here to answer this, but what was up with the condom? First he asks if they should use one, she says no need as she is on the pill. Then he stops short of telling her he can't make her pregnant as if he might have had a vascectomy but then he said he hadn't got his monthly clearance yet. What?

So they are now fucking without one, but later we find out that he is wearing one but it seems she doesn't know because he takes it off, ties it, and palms it all without her seeing. He then smirks about it. Ok, so what's it about?

He is portrayed as a devious schemer, so what's his plan with the used condom full of his own, probably sterile, sperm?

A forgotten plot thread?

BarrySDBarrySDalmost 4 years ago
Loved it

Great story Well written

Just_WordsJust_Wordsalmost 3 years ago

She deserves him and should lose her husband in the process. Neither of them are decent human beings.

DORTMAN69DORTMAN69almost 3 years ago

Quels sont ces imbéciles qui traite cette femme de (pute) parce qu'elle trompe un mari incapable de s'occuper d'elle !!!! Pourquoi lise t'ils Lîterotica ? Ce sont des MASOS DEBILES ou quoi ?!?!?!?!

DORTMAN69DORTMAN69almost 3 years ago

Très belle histoire BRAVOS au patron et à la jeune femme !!!! Ils y a tellement de jeunes cocus qui s'ignore !!!! D'ailleurs je me demande pourquoi ils lisent LÎTÉRÔTÎCÀ qui est un site spécialisé dans l'adultère 😅😅🤣😇🥰🤩

DORTMAN69DORTMAN69almost 3 years ago

Très belle histoire de VÎE ! Très moraliste en fait !!!! Un patron Présent et soucieux de distraie les femmes qui s 'ennuie !!! Une épouse délaissée par un mari egoiste incapable de L'honorer !!!! Cette épouse revie comblée par un vraie homme !!! CE mari est un cocu magnifique qui mérite son sort !!!!!!! Fable très Moraliste !!!!!!!!!

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Cheating corporate whore is one more lame LW plotline.

kirei8kirei8almost 2 years ago

Another little pervert writer wanting to see his "attached" get fucked in real life. Pathetic!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

fucking pig!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Condom or no condom? She says no condom and women can feel less sensation also.

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