All Comments on 'It's So Wrong Ch. 01'

Indian, incest and femdom.

This combo is always feels awesome to read

Waiting for next one

I had a crush on my older cousin who smoked. I wish she would have done this to me ... very hot! very curious about what she does next.

Long white cigarettes and sex.....perfect combination

I'm not really into a smoking fetish, so that part of the story was wasted on me, but interestingly done.

But you really need an editor. You wrote "collage" when you meant COLLEGE. He has an "8 inch thick cock"? I suspect an elephant doesn't have an 8-inch thick cock. Maybe he has a THICK, 8-INCH LONG cock. The correct phrase is not "Tale-teller marks", it's TELLTALE marks.

I'd sure have liked it better if she didn't just TALK about teasing his cock for hours, but she actually did it.

And what about her breasts? Describing them as 34C's is pretty much all they were involved. While she was teasing his cock she could have teased him with her breasts too. Looking at them naked. Touching them herself. Letting him touch them. Feel them. Kiss them. Suck on them.

I gave it four stars.

ok...