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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good but,

It's a hot story for sure, but you need a editor. Your grammer is a bit off and you get a bit repetitive.

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Love reading and writing erotica. Grew up in India, currently live in California. My stories are my dark fantasies, laced with kink, BDSM, and fetishes.

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