All Comments on 'I've Been Missing Out Ch. 02'

by SylviaG

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JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969about 15 years ago
Good story

I like it. Don't let mary go back to her old ways. Let her have her fun. Please continue.

bruce22bruce22about 15 years ago
Great Portrayal

of the problems in enjoying yourself in our society.

I can see that there are good reasons for their concern, but

basically she does not owe anything to anyone and has the right to make her own mistakes.

hansbwlhansbwlabout 15 years ago
Fantastic.

Interesting situation. I hope she has the guts to tell her friends to split!

Spice1959Spice1959about 15 years ago
Turnabout is fair play

Mary needs to find a couple of young studs to fuck the bitchyness out of Sandra and Jill............you go girl

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Nice story.

She has nobody to please but herself and seem to be doing a good job of it.

katibkatibabout 15 years ago
Better all the time...

The more I read, the more I liked it. You have unusual skill with portraying the dialogue of your characters. Very well done.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 11 years ago
You

have a way of developing characters. Mary is very real. Just one thing though... not everyone of her generation and older had such a repressed life.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggabout 11 years ago
Fab Read !

The author has a way of making extremely visceral the tones & inflections of the dialogue. The fear of giving in and abandon of letting go is also wonderfully chronicled.

thebug37thebug37over 8 years ago
Pills - church - what would dead hubby think

Okay, the title says it all; who cares?

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 5 years ago
Amazing

You have really captured a slice of life perfectly. This story is brilliant. -- JB

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