All Comments on 'I've Been Missing Out Ch. 02'

You have really captured a slice of life perfectly. This story is brilliant. -- JB

Okay, the title says it all; who cares?

The author has a way of making extremely visceral the tones & inflections of the dialogue. The fear of giving in and abandon of letting go is also wonderfully chronicled.

have a way of developing characters. Mary is very real. Just one thing though... not everyone of her generation and older had such a repressed life.

The more I read, the more I liked it. You have unusual skill with portraying the dialogue of your characters. Very well done.

She has nobody to please but herself and seem to be doing a good job of it.

Mary needs to find a couple of young studs to fuck the bitchyness out of Sandra and Jill............you go girl

Interesting situation. I hope she has the guts to tell her friends to split!

of the problems in enjoying yourself in our society.

I can see that there are good reasons for their concern, but

basically she does not owe anything to anyone and has the right to make her own mistakes.

I like it. Don't let mary go back to her old ways. Let her have her fun. Please continue.