All Comments on 'Ivory Kisses'

There was so much passion in this story! I couldnt read it fast enough!!

Excellent story! I especially loved the twist at the end!

This is really impressive!! Not even a -hint- of foreshadowing of the end... wow. Great job.

I hope there are more like it to come ;)

That was great! I loved it. I wasn't even in the mood for a vampire story, but you seduced me and I read it too the end! I can't wait to read more.

gute story mit einem überraschenden ende ;-)

very sexy! I did not see the end comming, wonderful!

Totally hot and well written. I can't wait to see more!

Loved it, loved it. What a delicious little story.

The details in your story were what puts you apart from many other writers and makes you a true artist. You have great potential and might want to consider writing full length books in the romance industry. Such amazing talent deserves to be published and shared.

What an excellent, erotic, enticingly, sweet ass story!! (excuse my language) The climax and the ending was the best!! Who knew that would happen. I loved this story!

The ending was great I loved it brought a smile to my face.

That was GREAT! The ending was a total suprise... usually they live happily ever after... totally loved the change of the norm:)

That was awesome! You've inspired me to make a few changes in my stories. I would love to talk to you more...please keep writing. You have such talent and I'm not just being nice. This was fabulous. I'm sorry if something is misspelled. Sometimes I can get confused. Anyway, next time I see your user name I won't hesitate.

That was so wicked of you /chuckle. I never expected the twist at the end and I was so wishing for a happy ending for both of them. He seemed like the perfect match for her. Disappointed that he had to turn into a pile of dust but still it was a good story and well written. You certainly have us all fooled. LOL

Adrian and I did not see that coming!

:)

I liked it, but one question: on page 2 how did she use her hands after he tied her up?

"Adrian untied a now pliant Selena, kissing and nibbling her wrists where the bonds had been."

He untied her after her first orgasm.

And your little twists are wonderful. Keep up the amazing writing :)

What a fantastic turn around!

Your writing is excellent.

Great story. I was feeling sorry for the young woman-then... Ahah!

Wish she and the vampire would have ended up together :/

I loved the twist and ah...temptation she offered. I would love to hear more of her adventures; shes positively bad ass.

I liked it a lot.

I liked Selena a lot - the way she was described, AND occupied reading "Dracula", she's a girl after my heart ... (I love vampires, I love reading and I love libraries!).

The sex scene was sooo hot, OMG, it gave me the shivers! To have a vampire make love to you: there's one of my fantsies right there !! ^^

Your writing is fine, your use of terms great. Much better grammar and spelling than some of the stories I've read here. I liked it.

Unfortunately, your anatomy is a bit off. You are under the same misconception as numerous others. A woman's hymen is at the entrance to her vagina, not inside. Your vampire couldn't stroke her g-spot without deflowering her.