by PrevertedMe
I like that this is finally a non consent story in the non consent section. So many of the non consent stories are just no means yes stories. This was good yet not too violent and disturbing.
well done.
For some reason I don't usually get into the whole, "Feel me do this, slut," kind-of talking dirty, but I found myself really really getting into it this time. You made it so hot it was hard not to get into. Great job.
I find your words were chosen ( or maybe statements of fact). One might think you really did this and that you have done it more than once. The part I never seem to understand is why ??? What is it you get out of her pain and torture????
I find it much more exciting to have a filling woman one wanting to full fill both our needs. But thanks for the insiders view
men before fucking :-all women are angels beautiful
men after fucking even once :-she is a slut she came ,bah all women are sluts ,whore,cunt
yup the woman who gave you was also a street whore so pimp like you were born
The details of what he sees and thinks is incredible. I have read very few stories that do such an excellent job of allowing the reader inside the head of an attacker.
As I understand him thus far, he chooses them because he finds them beautiful, and then stalks them to determine when to strike. He derives great pleasure from trapping and controlling them. This is not an opportunistic, angry rapist. He finds every part of his meticulous process erotic.
I gave four stars for the writing only because I couldn’t bring myself to five-star a serial rapist. What he does is so creepy, not even the dirty talk could get me to enjoy this beyond the line of good storytelling.