All Comments on 'J and J Ending'

That he would even contemplate the possibility of further interaction with the obnoxious cum dump is....incredulous!

This was a good story about the consequences of JoAnna going off and seeking pussy and strange cocks without realizing what she lost in her marriage to John. By the end of the story, the swap club was broken up and she was alone in her condo and not dating anyone. She wrote to John telling him that she was sorry for what she had done but it was too late for any reconciliation. Yes, there are always consequences to your actions. JoAnna learned this the hard way. Great story and five stars for sure.

The last sentence cost a star.

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Still needs more.

Not enough payback on his neighbors, especially Amos who had nothing on him. Disappointing!

too soft on her

This story needs another chapter. After 24 years of a good marriage and two kids she had a mental problem or empty nest syndrome but hey need to get together and hash it out. She has serious regrets and remorse and even he admits the sex was the best until she went off the rails. It will be even better when she is trying her damndest to please him.

Is it me or is AngelRider just an unlikable bitch? I just find myself hating every damn comment she makes.

Good conclusion.

Well, it was nice of the author to let us pick our own ending because this certainly wasn't the one I wanted. I would keep her as far away from the company as possible. No need of letting her try to worm her way into your business. As for being a good mother, what would you think of your mother if she had screwed your dad like JoAnn did you? Still think she's a good mother? As for taking her back maybe sometime in the future, NO. WAY. IN. HELL! She is used and abused, just a matter of time before she gets the ich again and goes looking for the excitement she used to have fucking all those men and women.

Cmon, give us a damn ending

OK,

Good ending! No tropes

Didn't wimp.kept his self respect and had the courage to walk away.

Joanns letter of contrition...BS. Her character amd deranged moral compass are hard wired. I'm sure she's hurting from all her losses but as soon as that passes she'll be back. Just on a smaller scale.

I really appreciated ANGEL RIDERS comments. I found it very educational and gave me a new approach to reading interpretation.

I'm trying my hand at writing a short story and wish I could contact him for guidance and editing.

Last, and, admittedly, a pet peavey, DON'T always have the MC urge the kids to reconnect with their mother. These kids mother us pur evil and I would not EVER let her neat or contact my family in any way. They don't have to hate her but she's just to high a risk to let her in.

Let the kids make their own decisions. If the MC doesn't want to trash the Ex to them that OK .

Wargamer, besides your age, nothing you wrote was accurate. There is a difference between monologue and dialogue. Dialogue involves two or more characters having a conversation. Monologue is delivered by one character to express feelings and/or thoughts to the audience, reader, or character. JoAnn's letter was a monologue. Furthermore, the notion that words unused in everyday speech ought not be used in fiction is false. Ordinary language and literary language may overlap, but in no way is it accurate or even reasonable to argue that all writing should mimic everyday speech.

Consider how one communicates through writing vs. verbal communication. I do not typically use words like furthermore, hence, or yet in my verbal interactions, but they are very useful when writing to deliver a point. You will note that I used "one" to start this paragraph. I rarely have cause to use one in this manner during conversation. One is used herr to represent the hypothetical individual. Others may use "you" but I find that presumptuous. As would "consider how everyone." Writing often requires the use of synonym and/or antonym to prevent repetion. Highlighting or stressing a point may be more successful using words that may hold greater significance to the reader. Dastardly is hardly an outrageous selection. It is a synonym to heinous or wicked. Those would have sufficed also. Joann was bemoaning guilt and shock at her behavior. The reader determine whether she was genuine. Perhaps using dastardly in everyday speech is rare but again, it was literary language. Farmer is supposed to use literary language. Even when a story is written using colloquial or regional dialect for dialogue and monologue, literary language is still present.

Lastly, i feel i must defend Farmer_Son's dialogue and him in general. I have certainly been critical. I may not always like Farmer's stories. I may not always feel that he has justified his plot. I found this chapter particularly too short and open-ended. It's a pet peeve. I am of the opinion that open-ended resolutions rarely "work" as often as they are used. I have debated this many times. That has no bearing on the fact that Farmer writes extremely well. I never take issue with his grammar and structure. His dialogue is excellent. I commented on one of his stories the other day to laud his dialogue. It was superb.

Considering that you nearly always vote and comment based upon whether the cheating wife was sufficiently burned to your satisfaction, are you really chastising Farmer for using dastardly or are you really pissed that he presented Joann as contrite, sad and remorseful? Or, are you mad that John helped her to a point?

Seems more likely

People don’t talk the way you write. Dastardly????

Who uses that word in common language anymore, lm 69 and even l don’t.

You ruin your own stories with the confected dialogue you use.

Scores 2/5

Why bother. It isn't an ending. It adds very little to the plot.

Why do you authors say "she was a good mother?"

She tried to drug, blackmail and literally ruin her OWN husband. That's an evil person, not a good person.

1* as I can't stand authors who use that stupid line.

A good mother doesn’t conspire to drug, sexually assault, and blackmail!

And, of course, he pussies out and lets the people who helped destroy his life go and doesn't burn them to the ground as they deserve. Seriously, some people are just weird.

I originally gave this one a 3 star rating. After a second reading I changed it to a 2 star. Primarily because of the last 2 sentences...

You let them off. Just wrong. And, fuck her getting let off with the kids, she did it, she pays thru the loss of ALL her family.

Why would her boys forgive her?

Would not happen.

Let her near your wife and kids, Noooo!!!!!!

Scores 2/5, why?

Because react to this shit when it goes down badly.

They drugged him and they get off with no repercussions. He needs to divorce her now she's on her own, just because he can! With seemingly no one to help her when she is divorced it will be even more lonely for her. Why did she want to get a job at his company? Seem she's barking, or perhaps she's hoping to find out where he is.

One trope that really should not appear in tales of sordid behavior such as that of the wife and her "friends" is, "...but she was a good mother." Really?

First chapter was good. This is a pos. It still is unfinished. Why bother. You invite other endings because you know how bad this bs was.

Think the ending was a bit abrupt.Surely there is more mileage in this story.

Yeah, you don't come back from that. Good solution.

Errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. The author did say, quote 'My ending to the story. Please feel free to add or change.' So anyone winging about the end of the story, write your own ending. As to the Swingers Group, united they stood, united they fell.

Aah!. Another pathetic Simping Cuck, just waiting to break out and take the whore back. What has happened to people these days? Is this how society has developed? Is this the 'New Progressive' mindset?

let her vacation with you a week or two. every Biker, especially a Harley Biker needs a "Bitch" on the back !!! LOL

Repeat the equation and expect a different result? This stupidity from an engineer?!

A lukewarm and incomplete ending. Ugh

What did he think the little sex club was about...romance? Of course they were only interested in pussy.

Lame ending to a lame story.

Thanks for creating a quite good and fairly thorough story - and then - just cutting it off and dropping your readers in the dumpster!!!!

It would be perfectly OK and much appreciated if you actually wrote a part 3 ending of some kind of reasonable and satisfying ending for both parties; counseling, living in the same town at least, divorce, test dates, harmonious trial RV traveling together that gradually forces some communication, or letting one or both find someone to brighten their heart and soul and help them to heal. HOPEFULLY TOGETHER gradually rebuilding trust and communication before a possible renewed future together ????

SW

Ugh yes do the sane JoAnna and expect a different result.

Come on finish this

I would certainly rule that last suggestion.

Thank you for providing an ending!

Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Thank you sir and of course, no nitpicking from me

Well written. I would have enjoyed about 4 more paragraphs of the Judge. Something like 400 convictions needing to be retried, sent to a federal prison, plus having his ass sued off . Amos needing crutches or a wheelchair. Maybe a 5 years later get together to see what ends the story.

STILL STUPID. Sluts are NOT good mothers; ask your sons!

You might take her back?????

Double dumb stupid.

Not happy??? triple dumb stupid!

you got a ZERO for both chapters.

Some of this sequel was great such as the repercussions on the swingers, but overall I was dissatisfied with the ending.

For those that don't understand the last two sentences, it's easy: the guy is living in a motorhome, is lonely, misses the home life, having a wife, companionship... all things associated with his ex wife. It's just a fantasy.

I don't understand the part about the guys wanting her only for the sex. Did she think they were interested in her for stimulating and provocative conversation? Three at a time?

Ruined by the last two sentences!! Who would touch a well used whore who had been fucking all and sundry for months (Years?) without a qualm?! Amos the Douchebag was a player, so who knows what filth he brought to the party?

Some other comments have it right. Good stories with good plots but ruined by poor endings.3*s.

Why would he even consider touching the cheating whore again? How infected would the cesspool between her legs be by now? You almost completely ruined a good story with your thoughts of considering any kind of reconciliation! 1 star.

Huh ? ??. The ending does not make any sense???? Why give her a job?? Why throw out the possibility of reconciliation

endings are consistently weak. His ending chapter scores seem to reflect that too.

From what was written in the first story...this is a Joke.......

Poor ending,there had to be more that could have been added,eg did he ever go back to his firm,did he get divorced?.

It's a really good story. Do I have some qualms with it? Sure, I'm human. But it's your story, which I happen to like. If I didn't like it? Well,it'd be move on, nothing to see here.

I've had opportunity to read some of what I've authored in the past (different content, different directions) after it was released and had to wonder what dipshit wrote that drivel. Of course, it was moi. Can't please everyone including ourselves.

Overall this story went into different tangents than most, hit a few very good high spots and was a very good piece on the hubris of mankind and our ability to block everything out in the pursuit of our own happiness, damn the cost to others.

So, thank you for this work :)

Yup. Last paragraph soured it? I’m all for reconciliation when it makes sense, but to bend over and take the abuse the guys in farmers sons stories, well it’s sick.

We have to wonder what reason the idiot had for going to a party where he pretty much knew they were going to drug him?? The only reason that can be deduced is that he was STUPID!! Anyway he managed to escape by the skin of his teeth but still has to hide out until the motor home was ready so why didn’t he do that in the first place??

But the biggest problem with this story appears right at the end with “ Who knows it might even be JoAnna”? The story teller had it all together and then blew it with that stupid comment!!

I gave it a five stars. But I do think the confrontation needs to be done. Power corupts, in this case absolutely corrupts. Good to have that lawyer in his pocket, huh?

F_S, you are playing to a very tough crowd. Clearly, many would be happy only with death, maiming or something involving foreign brothels. Others want all loose ends tied tightly and a perfect crystal ball reading of the future. Thanks for a realistic finish, although I squirmed at the ending hint of reconciliation. Dealer's choice = author's call. Keep 'em comin'.

Stupid comments authors ask for others to add more. How dumb can people be.

Cheating club is not punished enough.

Amos more physical punishment.

Lawsuits against everyone for every thing possible.

Ruin the whole story. One star is too many.

What's missing is the confrontation.

I'm in complete agreement with Anon 07/22/19. This was kinda boring and pointless and honestly should have just been included with the main story. There were a few things of note but really nothing worth writing about. Sure, he left and stood up for himself and protected his assets, kinda, but now he's just a sad little man driving aimlessly about the country. Guy should have gotten a divorce a long time ago, gone back to his home town and found a woman who doesn't think with her crotch. The shit's blown over by now and all her little fuck friends are gone and can't hurt him, so why is he still hiding? Silly and boring.

He left, and gave her his letter, she was STILL getting gangbanged. She had no regrets, even showing his letter to her to her fuck buddies. She only stopped when FORCED to do so, by getting fired, publicly humiliated, and was cut off when her fuck buddies left, and she was caught in the act by her son. Doesn't sound like she was too broken up by his departure, only by the consequences of going against his lawyer.

With the ridiculous plots and actions in your stories, you could at least have ONE of the maligned and humiliated cucks divorce the cheating bitch that obviously hates him and goes out of her way to hurt him. Instead of feeding your penchant for leaving open ended stories where you leave enough hints to suggest a re-cuck-concilliation ending, ACTUALLY write a fucking ending once in a while!

I wish I could join him with a matching setup and dump my wife/life too, but I need to win the lotto, first. I could complement his gadgiteering/tinkering as I'm a HAM w/MS-EET.

If there is a fault in the story is he did not burn the CHEATERs hard enough. The PI would have nefarious connections that could administer alley justice while he is RV'ing the other side of the USA.

Her CHEAT and desire to drug/blackmail him went way over the edge requiring retribution for 4 wasted years. The boys dumping her is not enough, loosing her job due to her lack in community trust is not enough - she needs serious payback.

why not add a third chapter to where they do get back together

This isn't a new chapter, this is just a sad little epilogue that should have been tacked on to the first chapter.

The plan to keep himself and his wealth protected was a smart one. He could walk away and live the life of retirement he chose. The wife lost her sons respect, her job and was sued but, in the end had enough money to purchase a "nice condo" because she sold her home. John never even filed for divorce. Then there are others involved in the community who were shown to have not suffered any major or lasting consequences for their actions, why? The only person who seemed to have suffered was the fake friend Amos; I am of the opinion that is a travesty of justice and wrong. Where is the investigation once the truth came out with the judge, since the two officers knew the truth of the group succeeding in the criminal act of premeditated-drugging him. The neighbors turning on one another is not a consequence.

For her future grandchildren? Not no, but hell no. Joanna was ugly, skanky soul that should never be allowed to care for small children. She drugged her husband to get her way. She should have spent time in jail for that nonsense.

the only real problem i have is how contradictory the ending was. you TRIED really hard to salvage the ex-wife, but it was too little and too late. Once you wrote her as a character that would:

1) drug a man 2) have that man raped by other men/women 3) film it on camera for possible black-mail/money/sick personal pleasure 4) and do not forget how the husband found some small evidence that she was already in the process of leaving him by having personal accounts.

Once you wrote her that way, a cheap 'i'm too stupid to live' letter means nothing. she's NOT a good mother because she's a psycho that would drug and rape people. she's unhinged if she can profess love for the same person she denied sex to, verbally abused, cheated on, conspired to drug and rape. that...is an UNSTABLE mind.

a saintly spouse MAY forgive a cheater that wanted to push swinging like the wife did after who knows how long of cheating with an entire club AND denying that spouse sex. Those are all marriage enders, but with enough skill you can pull off a good RAAC. I'v read those stories, and I think you have too. You were blending in some of those elements here. If the criminal activity wasn't there, you COULD do a decent job of this. I cannot believe the husband still holds love for that monster, or thinks she's a good mother. Or believes she's capable of another shot. Normally I would. You did such a good job of making this woman a sociopath, that even hinting a RAAC is silly. Yes, silly. I won't insult you, you're a talented author. But this, two contradictory themes....being FORCED to blend within a span of a few paragraphs....is silly. I'm not saying BTB. I pity her. She needs mental help. Yea, she's a violent criminal....or planned to be. She's holding beliefs that cannot occupy the same head space. She is by all accounts a high functioning psychopath. I'm not an expert...I don't know what type of personality disorder she has....but she's got at least one. I wouldn't let her near my dog, let alone my sons. I wouldn't have an ounce of love left for her. I speak from experience. I pity my crazy ex....but they burned ALL the bridges. And they are criminal. Like killing small animals for fun. Like....this is the character you created. I hope you really understand that. Because the husband doesn't seem to.

John needs some help too. If he's ever going to move forward or if he's going to decide to forgive Joanna, he needs to get mental help as it seems he just can't let go of the past. To be fair, it hasn't been that long. Your time line hints at 6 months, but some things in this chapter would seem to have needed more time to pass than 6 months. But in the end, you once again left us hanging. He's "not betting on it but he won't rule it out". UGH!

So open ended, will they or won't they?

Drugging and blackmailing is unforgivable, maybe the multiple sex partners could be, especially for a couple together 25 years and looking to wind down. Maybe, perhaps for the right couple with a better man than me.

He claims she was a good mother, so if nothing else he should let her know what they are up to, no need to break their confidences and tell her where they are.

Amos, among all of them should have had far more done to him, knowingly fucking a married woman is bad enough, it's worse knowing the husband, but a long time friend is the highest of treason.

You took a great story and with the last two sentences managed to take all that hard work and toss it in the shitter!

In chapter 1, JoAnna was an evil whore. She was fucking legions of guys and planned to drug her husband, then have some men sexual assault him so he could be blackmailed into going along with her debauchery.

If the cheating wife goes off the deep end, like JoAnna did in this story, there should never be any reconciliation or redemption... you get into farcical RAAC territory. She deserved to have her life completely destroyed and left miserable and cut off from her family for all the shit she did.

John softening his approach towards her was unbelievable considering what she planned to do to him. If that was my wife, I wouldn't want her anywhere near our sons. She'd proven she was vindictive, cruel, and completely without morals... you don't want people like that involved with your family. Him giving her a job and bleating on about hoping the boys would forgive her stuck in the craw.

A decent sequel would have had charges brought against the drugging rapists and John ruining all their lives. JoAnna should have done time, then when the bitter ex-con got out of prison, found herself penniless and completely disowned by her sons.

The reason to not diverse is gone, his boys now know and are moving on themselves. Time for him to get his ass in gear and divorce the slut not muse about reconciliation. Consider why she's talking all full of remorse now: lost her job, any new one won't pay her life style, she's been outed so no rich guy is likely to be taken in by her anytime soon and who the most likely patsy to fix all her woes? She hasn't changed, she's just altered tactics to fit her new needs - avoiding being poor. Dump her and move on. There is happiness out there if you will go look for it, looking to step back in hell sure isn't a logical plan!!!!

However, let's get into 'the training and care of a wife'.

My wife knows how I do things. She doesn't try to change me. I don't try to change her.

A NEW woman in my life WILL try to change me, which is a whole battle which I'd just as soon not have.

That is why he might reconsider her seeing the errors of her ways.

But drugging and blackmail? Um...that's a big thing to overcome. Not for me, thanks unless it is separate RVs.

Are prime wife material ,there are so few fish in the sea.

thanks for posting it

I was looking forward to a grandiose revenge ending. Oh well still a decent read.

Just finished reading this story and would really lovea part 3, the other one you did we good but this was better. Just need more to see what happens next

His impression was correct, the wife he knew was long gone.

Now- would you consider doing a part 3? Your writing is very skillful and very entertaining and a continuation of this story would be very much appreciated.

Thanks for the story 5*****

Good second part to J and J.Can we have a third?.

Money is no object to this guy? He can buy a motorhome a trailer and a harley plus have an investigator working full time. Then he doesn't need to work anymore either....c'mon! I also found it funny that Mr. Perfect lost 2 inches in height...from 6'2" to an even 6'. I like to see a husband get out of a bad marriage without getting raped but too often you writers get carried away as is the case here! Hubby has all the cash and no worries while the slut wife has no money, no job and no house. Plus she has to go to work for hubby. See what I mean? Plus he couldn't have been to great of a husband or a father. One son is living at home but we never hear about him except at the end and wifey is fucking around for a year or so and he hasn't a clue. It must have been true love alright! LOL

Her note leaves it clear that she believes he has disconnected from the local scene and thus was an attemṕt to reintegrate him. I don't think he bit...

One thing that I thought strange was the fact that the swinger group accepted one member of a couple without the spouse being involved. That sounds like a recipe for a disaster, such as occurred. But the even stranger behaviour was her working so hard to get him to join in. Was she feeling guilty? Maybe she did love him.

Really I am sad read this story from the first part. Bat the end is very good, really very good... good story good job

Was good. Interesting very interesting. Second part....well until the final sentence was good. Last sentence killed the whole story. Interesting though.

This one, not so much. "I'm seeing a therapist to know why I was a bitch and to find myself" Boo Hoo Boo Hoo. I think JoAnn would have continued with the sex parties if the video hadn't come out: consider the fact that her son finding her with three men. And that was after her husband left.

Would have liked for John to have a bit happier life but it doesn't always come to pass.

Thanks for the hard work.

Woodmanone

ARE YOU CRAZY, YOU PORTRAYED HER AS A CUNNING EVIL WITCH,SEPERATE BANK ACCOUNT,STTING HIM UP FOR SOME PRETTY NASTY GARBAGE,,,,,WHY THE FREE RIDE,,,I THOUGHT HE WAS PLANNING ON DRUGING THE ENTIRE GROUP,SILLY ME.

Thanks for sharing.

i am a little surprised that the cops did not send him to the hospital to have a drug test

the bitch and her friends could be charged with attempted murder.

he may have been allergic to the drug that he was given.

if he takes her back he is putting his life in danger...... god knows what she may do while he is sleeping.

he is rich and pussy will be thrown his way so he doesn`t the cheating bitch .

let the bitch suffer .....

remind her every day what she lost ...... lmfao

great job in writing this story and it was a fun read so thanks

he should get back to her and also both need to seek therapy

So it wasn't scintillating but life rarely is. It felt like a reasonable ending to what had been laid out. Our narrator will surely find more fish in the sea and certainly there are some who would like to have a decent marriage. He may even decide to go outside his comfort zone and find a nice black or brown lady. I guess that's my fantasy life talking! It seems my appreciation of beauty has broadened as I have gotten older!

R.

Read your most recent and then everything else. Very well done. Love how the emotions drive the story. Thanks for well written, engaging stories.

I guess you put a lot of effort into Part 1 and wanted to move on to something new.

That's OK.

Part One was a story left unfinished so when I saw this, I figured the author had done some thinking and added an ending to wrap it up. What I found was partially alright but mostly wimpy... which doesn't fit the description of a guy who founded, built and oversees a powerhouse business. THAT man has to know how and when to kick asses and take names so he's not going to tolerate the shitty treatment he got that was described in part one and the bullshit about not being astute enough to figure his wife out is ridiculous. NOBODY with his intellect, savvy and experience is that naive or stupid as to not find out WHAT'S GOING ON AND POSSIBLY WHY.

As I captioned this... it was a big let down so I grudgingly gave it three stars. * * * and already regret my generosity.

. . . just OK. The plot was fine, but the writing left a lot to be desired. Parts of it just seemed kind of stupid. Oh, well. On to the next one. . .

So he is still on the road and he can cook. Wow! He lives somewhat like a hermit except he has an RV instead of a cave. He even has the odd woman or so wandering past his cave, probably just as dicey as he is, to have sex with. The whole thing has a survivalist feel.

Back home at the ranch, his wife has seen the light. Hallelujah! She continued her activities until he indirectly firebombed the group. Here comes the judge! There goes the judge. All of a sudden all the members of the group are pariahs. Of course her son catches her and ALSO goes on the run, as does her second son. All the men are in hiding from this now supposedly powerless and beaten screw of a woman.

He won!

But he's still on the run living in a cave. His wife's apologies seem thin gruel indeed. He hopes she will reconnect with their kids and is willing to hire her at his company. How, oh-so-civilized. Amos is just fine. He's a stud. Probably has a nice artificial knee and has picked up several other wives to cuckold their husbands. Isn't that the way the world is supposed to work? Best of all, now that his wife has lost her job and her house and her "friends" who amazingly were friends only to fuck her, she seems to have tamed her libido.

It all seems so normal and bloodless. He is trying desperately to convince himself that he is happy while he hides in the wilderness. He has money and success, the respect of the people at his company and in the industry, the love of his sons, has triumphed over his victimizers and had them publicly destroyed. It's the perfect wrap up, yet he hides from one shrew.

Dude, the only animal you need to mention in that regard are otters. Male otters will not only provide group pleasure for other species, they quite honestly ruin them for anything else. On top of that, monogamous minded otters will guard their chosen mates for weeks at a time keeping them from harm.

Of course the group pleasure ends in death for the other species and the female otters being guarded were murdered by the males before copulation began, but we can't allow ourselves to be distracted by trivialities when discussing the animal nature of swinging!

We're only animals, right?

I enjoyed reading although I do wish the last part would have been a little longer. All in all though it was an enjoyable read.

This wasn't thought out well at all. There has to be some believably somewhere in the story but this had none that I could see.

She was a bad wife but a good mother? No, not true. It has been said, the greatest thing a father can do for his children is to lover their mother. Easily, the worst thing you can do for your children is to betray, disrespect, cheat on their other parent. She is not a good mother, or she would be using all her extra time involved in her family, not disrespecting their father and fucking the neighbors.

Johanna has found herself again? Bullshit! Johanna is just sorry she lost her powerful well paying job, her family, and her fuck buddies. She is obviously sorry she got caught and alienated her entire family. She is also still sorry that she could not convince her husband to join their fuck club. But she seems to still think that promiscuity is fun. Group sex among married people always ends with some participants cheating, falling in love with others, and destroying families.

Johanna's failure as a wife, and as a mother, isn't just because she has no morals, ethics, or self respect. Johanna is just too stupid to be a good wife and mother. If this dumb shit takes her back he deserves everything she is going to dump on him.

Yeah, I wondered the same thing. Especially on this one. I know you didn't read the first one but it doesn't seem like the payoff would justify the risks. But it did seem like that whole group was pretty arrogant. They were also very self centered and had that 'rules don't apply to us' attitude.

Never understood the husbands attitude in these stories where they want the kids to still have a good relationship with the mother. They don't have to try to turn them against their mother, but why encourage one? The cheating hurts the WHOLE family, not just the husband/father. Yes it hurts the husband/father the most, but it hurts the kids too. At least in this story the kids are in college. Some in that swing group probably did have younger children who now have to be in some type of local school and hear other kids talking about their parents and what they have been doing. What a tough life for them! It's like any other harmful behavior, it affects the whole family. That's why it's called a family unit.

Would have liked a longer chapter. Can't really see a reconciliation any time soon. Way to many betrayals to get past. She could be a side piece, but why would you? The cheating, lying, the disrespectful conduct, the plotting, scheming, the betraying behavior and the conspiracy to drug and sexually assault and then blackmail him. No, he's safer sleeping with a rattlesnake.

This is a well crafted, intriguing story with good character development and an enjoyable read. I'd love to see it develop to an acceptable denouement.

Thanks for sharing it for my enertainment.

Chur bro awesome story