All Comments on 'Jack'

for this wonderfull story!

I Really loved it !! :) :):)

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Intelligent, sensual. Please continue your writing.

Would love to read more.

Good start

very well written and hot, not much male switch stuff on here

(speaking personally he reads as a switch to me, never been overly comfortable with other people explaining away desires/kinks as social pressure)

Well written, respectful, and has a depth to it that is not just the cold brutality that comes across in so much femdom writing (thank you for that!).

I look forward to reading more of your work. This was a great little story to get lost in. :)