All Comments on 'Jack & Junebug Go To Prison Ch. 01'

I want to know what you guys think of my story, Please Leave a Comment!!!

Tell me if it sucks(We'll we know Jack sucks, and he sucks quite well!).

Tell me if it rocks!

I will write the Second Part soon, its gonna be really good!!!

And To My Fans Thank You Again.

I Loved This Story!!!! Its very hot, and well worth jerking off too. He'll I read it three times, and came all three times! I Can't Wait to See More, Please Write More!!!

The writing was abysmal, and the story should have been labelled "Gay" -- please, never write again. You are just too untalented for words.

but you used their names too much and it took forever to get to the point.

keep writing but next time use less draging description and more hot action

That's exactly what I'd do if I was in prison!!

Great story

I would like the follow up.

Forced anal cum when he didn't want it.