All Comments on 'Jack and The Fat Man Pt. 03'

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Fgvrvn12Fgvrvn12about 2 months ago

I wonder if Jack's father will be one of Arnold's slaves?

bhart1bhart1about 2 months ago

I like the way you're pacing this out. Arthur is a very nurturing top, which makes the story more about Jack's journey of discovery than his own desire to claim the young man. I'm enjoying your style.

Cocksucker666Cocksucker66623 days ago

Great story it would be good if you could make a spin off story about Bob and his cheating wife

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