All Comments on 'Jack in the Box Ch. 01'

by PhantomOfMoonlight

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Really good

This is a very intriguing start. I'm really disappointed that you didn't continue the story.

WALTERALBERTWALTERALBERTalmost 3 years ago

To ' Phantom of moonlight'- this is a very good story---if you continue it---it sounds like an idea for a 'horror type movie--have you written stories for very long(stupid question)

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