All Comments on 'Jack Takes Over'

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laxwiguy210laxwiguy210over 1 year ago

I loved the story. Please keep it going. Maybe have his friends start coming over.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The domination was a bit over the top for my tastes. I wanted hubby to take cock on his own accord, not because he was ordered to. Frankly, I liked the first story better.

FreakSlaveFreakSlaveover 1 year ago

Very hot!

I'd love to be in his position with my wife! Have us both be his slaves!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

So different from "The begging". Really loved that one and thought it was a great place to start a great series. In this story I would have told her No in no uncertain terms. It would have been so much better to have brought Matt back into the story and find out he was bi even if he leaned more to males. That would be more realistic and more entertaining.

Dylan1Dylan1over 1 year ago

Not for me this one sorry, 'the beginning' was erotic. This story didn't have it, sorry.

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I'm an older submissive sissy who loves as much cocksucking and cum as I can get. I also love to be exposed and humiliated. I'd love your input and ideas.