All Comments on 'Jacked at the Y'

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annabellebritoannabellebritoabout 1 year ago

This is what a good hot short story should be! Simple, self contained, unexpected, and very hot! Love how it ended, what an ending to reflect on. Realistic reaction to what happened. Believable. Great story. Love how you described Pat, he reminded me of a cute almost emo teen. Love the contrasts between the two men.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Beyond hot…wish I was Pat being anally taken…my wife is stirring upstairs and I’m about to cum…I want to be caught

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Works with his hands man, who likes to talk to others about all types of erotic thoughts, curious ideas, and I role-play.. Married, divorced, kids. Tall, strong, lean. .