All Comments on 'Jackie's Rules Pt. 01'

This is great! Can't wait to see where it leads too.

A really great and promising start. Only the pace near the end of the chapter seemed a bit too fast. I'm looking forward on how this story will develop.

Great foundation, waiting to see how it develops.

oh this is an excellent, excellent start

Fantastic set up, could become one of the best series on the site, keep it up!

Great start I look forward to further chapters.

Great start. Looking forward to more.

oh my god you didnt...

I love how this starts masses of potential

This is just a lovely little story! Looking forward to reading the rest of them