All Comments on 'Jack's Women Ch. 05'

Really enjoying this story. Please keep them coming.

Thanks: Tom

If you considered maybe getting one or more pregnant.... that would be a hoot... maybe... or at least a "oh crap I might be pregnant" moment... especially with Leslie... just a thought.

Do you read the comments? The your/you're thing isn't getting any better. The rest of it's not too bad, but that happens enough to really distract from the story.

I cannot go any farther with this, it started out fine, but very soon lost track of any sort of story line. It degenerated to total wall to wall sex, and not very imaginative sex at that. Where is the character development? Nothing remains to redeem this story in my eyes.

Often in erotic fantasies (ie. Literotica), sex with virgins includes doing too much of too many different things for too long. Happened again here. At least anal was not a part of her virgin debut.

Some of this can be expected in an over-the-top Literotica fantasy, such as this. Even so, it felt a little too much to me.

The good side of it is that Jack went all out to ensure it was pleasurable for Leslie.

However, the big virgin error, was having his cock 2 inches into the vagina before encountering the hymen. The hymen covers the OPENING of the vagina, to "protect" the penis from entering.

Google: hymen location.

Paul in Oklahoma