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All Comments on 'Jade's X Rated Videos for Uncle Ch. 02'

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Viper7792Viper7792almost 2 years ago

I bet Dad is that unexpected surprise :) But he should spank her for fucking his brother first ;)

hrobbiehrobbiealmost 2 years ago

I was not ready for this chapter to end!

MarionsLoverMarionsLoveralmost 2 years ago

Very hot build up!

Such a tease, I so want Jade to fuck her daddy

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story. However it doesn't match the first chapter in the details. First off the car her uncle drove changed, then the biggest detail is jade is as tall as her uncle in chapter one, then the same height as her father in chapter two. In chapter one her father is the shortest of the brothers. Rant complete. Enjoy

nthusiasticnthusiasticover 1 year ago

You write well with vivid imagery, without overdoing the adjectives and adverbs. You do have a few issues with continuity between chapters. A proofreader would help tremendously with that, along with the occasional typo. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

blackknight314blackknight3149 months ago

Great job, thanks for sharing your work.

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