All Comments on 'Jail Bird Pt. 03'

Dam this was magnificent I forgot about this story but it was worth the wait. Definitely can’t wait for the next chapter 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 excellent work

I would love a scene with the woman who wrote the book being given the cease and desist order and finding out she is being sued and it's all her own fault for not writing the true.

LOVE how this story is progressing, and I am eager for more!

I've been waiting for this chapter and now i'll wait for the next one. Love this story.

Keep up the good work ;)

Great series so far thoroughly enjoying it. So please keep the updates coming

I was afraid this was an abandoned story. Glad that it's back. Great work

I've just been rereading your stories as I keep up to date on what stories of yours are due for release and this a soul food have not disappointed on amazing reads. I'm always amazed and annoyed how you leave me excited to read the next instalment when it's released and annoyed that there isn't more. Keep them coming and hopefully there will be many more of of this series as I do really enjoy how you write your stories with BDSM in.

Really like the Max and Kate interplay and want to read more of that and other developments covering his wrongful imprisonment.

Love this story and I look forward to seeing Max dish out his retribution to his family and those that slander him while taking and giving pleasure to Kate.

Great story, excellent stuff. Please make this into a long, long story. It has all the markings of a classic tale in the making.

Next chapter please, as soon as you can, don’t keep your fans waiting too long.

5/5

you have to extend this story. So great, I can only hope it become a long tale, i love the characters. Keep up the great work

Thanks for the entertainment. I hope there'll be more of this story soon! I appreciate the time and effort you put into this so far.

Honestly I think this series is your best work so far. Keep it up.

Re-reading for the third time. Good stuff.

Really interesting storyline, kept me engaged. Wondering about some things though:

1. How does a blind Domme engage with her subs?

2. Max may be dominant in his own way but he has a lot to learn to be a Dom. Who’s going to teach him? How?

3. There’s at least one member who is trying to usurp Kate. As she transitions to be Max’s sub, are there other sharks in the water looking to take a bite? Will Max be able to handle the situation this places him in? For example, if someone is interested in a financial takeover, what experience can Max draw from? Kate is the obvious answer. So wouldn’t an adversary try to get her out of the picture and then make a move? What if there’s a power play inside the club? Where in the past Kate has taken subs from other doms, if she is now exposed to be a sub to Max, wouldn’t it be up to Max to retain them? How would he react to some sort of challenge for his role in the club? Right now he’s not either a dom, sub, or switch. But if Kate either come out or is forced out into the open as being his sub? Well Max needs to get his act together! I recommend orgasm denialism followed by explosive forces orgasms… but that’s me 😏

That’s just some of the things I’m wondering about. There’s still his personal issues with his conviction, his family, former life including any former loves from that time, etc.

I think this is a awesome series and am looking forward to the next chapter.

Re-reading for the next chapter. Can't wait!