by soul71
For a story about prison rape, murder, BDSM, and sissies this is still a shockingly sweet story. I'll admit the BDSM stuff is no turn on and the stuff with the DA's husband is unappealing the core of the story with Max dealing with coming from prison and Kate falling for him is quite wonderful. Also enjoyed some characters from another story showing up. 5 stars, keep up the great work.
Great addition to the series. Especially since we see a more darker side to Max. I am curious to see what would happen to him and his parents, mainly his mother. Since she is the only one trying to make amends. And the reporter who life is blowing up from her mistake. Will he make all the women who wronged him, his slave. Can't wait for the part.
You Sir, are the best Author on this site. Damn, another 25 BIG STAR story! lol Love your writings!
Read this series for the first time after I saw your tweet about the fourth part update, what a fantastic read. I hope the part 5 come out this November 🙏
Wow what a chapter, I love it as all your other pieces you wrote. Wish I can give all over your work 10-20 stars.
Other than the part about max knowing nothing about smartphones (which unless he was Amish every 17 year old would know in 2015) this story was great. It was fun and entertaining. Thanks.
Another very compelling chapter. The contrast between the gentle romance with Kate and the freakshow BDSM lifestyle she's drawn him into makes for fascinating reading.
The part I actually enjoyed the most was Max's legal payback on the people who had slandered him and profited from his suffering. I look forward to hearing more about his revenge in the next chapter.
This is one series I can't get enough of. Loved it. Thank you for the chapter.
Great series and getting even better. Love the way Max is getting the justice he deserved and especially that in the final page. Love the way Kate and he interface and relate to each other. Hope to read more soon. 5⛤
waiting for the next chapter, amazing read and the depth of the characters is amazing
Love this story just one thing is If this is taking in 2022 I'm pretty sure he would know what a smart phone is and how to use it since in 2016 was the iPhone 7. Most people at that time had a smart phone or knew someone who did. Other than. That great story can't wait to read more
Going to say this once, this isn't based on this reality of ours, so why are you assuming it is when I have stated he only had a flip phone when he went in. In this universe smartphones didn't come out until he was already in prison.
Looking forward to,seeing the next chapter of this story! 5 stars once again
Great story. I have read this several times and I can't wait for more chapters. I hope you continue this story
Eagerly waiting for more of this story! I've read through all parts a dozen times, and keep checking back for more!
A great story so far, my new favorite after A Son Forced... Soul71 is one of my favorite author on this site, hopefully the next chapter will come out soon. I know having multiple stories makes it difficult, definitely appreciate the effort put in. Thanks!
The time frame of this story is weird. There's no way he's this clueless about technology if he went to prison in the mid 2010s. One second he's claiming there were no smartphones hen he went in but now seven years later he's buying a 2022 camaro???
I like this! So far, at least.
I love the dark background and how you let it influence the MCs character. But most of all, I love how the MC didn't immediately turn into a lost little boy who needs his family back at all cost, just because the sister was willing to put out for him.
The polot is consequential, the characters behave in a way that makes sense, and I enjoyed every single part of this story. Hope you continue this at some point!
As an avid reader of many authors here it bothers me that so many readers get caught up in stupid things. First if you are exceptional at finding flaws in style or grammar get a job doing it. Second when reading fiction that someone was kind enough to share with us enjoy the world they created how they created it! And last stop annoying authors to the point they quit.
I have read this story 4 times now. It’s one of my favorites. Can’t wait for the next part. This author is by far one of my all time favorites
This is only half the story you need to write the next four or five chapters to finish it. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Can't believe I'd missed this gem, a great story that had me hooked the entire time I was reading, hope you continue the great work!
You write weird, broken people better than anyone. I hope you complete this someday.
An excellent story, in the same vein as Miracle Cream and A Son Forced, with an nice crossover reference to Inheritance. Nicely done, hope you plan to continue this, and so many other of your stories.