All Comments on 'Jail House'

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SplendidSpunkSplendidSpunkabout 13 years ago
Hummmmmmmmmmmmmm

I liked the storyline, the concept of the wife, murder, etc, but the quick change to a 'safe house' and the instant move to sex with the cop husband, was stretching it thin. Love the sex angel and you will do well on that side. I want to see how you develop, I really like a lot of what I see here

Kevin aka SplendidSpunk

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