All Comments on 'Jaina the Sex Slave Ch. 30'

Another incredible chapter! Thank You!

Learn to spell, please

your writing is really good and you do make very interesting stories but sometimes you misspell your words and you need to proofread your stories before you publish them.

Wow, some of the hottest sex yet and the story remains engaging even 30 chapters in.. But, there are so many homophone substitutions and so many misspellings - it seems like you write it using voice to text and then don't have an editor. Literotica has a program for volunteer editors to clean up your stories and it would be really great if you would take advantage of that. Then again, the story and the sex are so good that a very large number of readers are still with you in spite of the errors.