All Comments on 'Jake 02: Career Move'

Is there more about Jake to see how he gets on

Please continue, this is a great story.

I loved the story hope to read more of it in the near future.

What a perfect Domme story the scope and plot in your imagination is perfect. Please continue with the business arrangement between Giselle and jake hopefully you have the time and energy to elaborate on this excellent plot.

Good chapter!

4

Great chapter. Giselle is creepy. I dislike her intensely. There’s nothing wrong with that. Every character can’t be my favorite. But sex with her is mechanical and contractual. Alienating is a good way to describe it. It’s sexy, but leaves a bad taste in my mouth. I would make a crappy Sex Worker.

You like to describe legs as “trained.” I know what you mean, but it’s not a regular English colloquialism. Try the phrase, “well toned legs,” or “a well toned body.”

—Grant

Exotically erotic!!!