I like the story. Jake sounds interesting. Maybe we can hear more about him. It was a little off-putting to read about him eating out a crack whore, especially after the comments he made about how nasty they are.
Been writing on and off years but never erotica. I have enjoyed sex all my life including some taboo but always with a wiling partner. Recently experimented with crossdressing and its a new experience that I enjoy while I'm learning. Doesn't compare to nailing a 20 year old's ...