All Comments on 'Jake the Yoga Instructor'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

"white surfer hair" wtf? A 70 year old surfer dude that also teaches yoga? or just a really confused author?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

No build up whatsoever and it seemed rushed, plus the numbers in the middle of each sentence distracted me. You didn’t describe in detail about his cock or how it felt whenever he entered her, I like when authors go into detail because I can imagine it

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Young writer trying to get better. Future best selling fiction author lol. My stories formatted for Kindle and paperback can be found here: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09JSRQV5C