All Comments on 'Jake's Decision - What to Do Next'

You should shorten the paragraphs a little though

I like the detailed descriptions - allows one to really get into the story. This is better than average writing.

I am wondering what birth control Mary uses though, with all that seed being pumped into her.

OK, so Jake is now a part time high class call girl. Being in correspondence with one escort agency owner, I have found out the new thrill is for "gambling" escorts. Those are escorts who not only go bareback, but go totally unprotected from pregnancy, no pill or diaphragm, for extra pay, and a bonus if they get pregnant. Hmmm, virgin every time or preg risk sex.

I wonder if Mary may like such a job in the real world?