All Comments on 'Jake's Personal Trainer Ch. 02'

Wonderful6 hot!

Keep exploring the heterosexual romance path with some BDSM role switching back and forth possibly. Preference is less gay.

So far its been a good read though!

I loved this the more I read it, I kept getting scared it was going to go a different direction, but I’m so glad it didn’t. I would love chapters to come

Good job. I like where this is going. Glad that he has the upper hand over that asshole Darren

This is great story and writing. Please continue the story. Don't prefer gay

Love where this has gone and could head. Definitely needs to include her pegging him.

Would love to see him get pegged after their date

Awesome story please continue

Loved it. Please don’t have us wait so long.... Prefer if turned into a more normal relationship

The femdom aspect of this story is great, truly lovely!

My opinion on the guy on guy stuff: keep it on a femdom context.

It is more exciting for any gay stuff to occur on a woman's command than just be on a main character going gay out of nowhere.

Also, since she seems jealous, it could be just one more way for her to show him who he belongs to.

Please, let the pegging begin!

Love your writing, as good as chapter 1!

to throw my opinion out there, I would prefer if m/m stuff was kept to a minimum. I'm here for the quality femdom, and I just don't get anything out of guy on guy stuff.

A wonderful follow-up to the original. It’s always nice to see an erotic meeting blossom into something intimate and wholesome. I’m personally not a fan of guy on guy stuff, but it was nice to see Jake show some confidence and initiative. Making a relationship feel organic and personal on a sex story website isn’t an easy thing to do, but you’ve done an excellent job in this chapter of writing an incredibly hot story and a likable couple.