All Comments on 'James & Beth Ch. 01'

This felt like a real experience...and that makes it SO much more erotic, than just the "action"...because it is so much easier to imagine being James this way. I am looking forward to reading chapter 2, and wish there were a whole BOOK of this story...or a collection of this writer's work.

That said...enjoy it while you can, right?!?

As I read along my cock just got harder and harder and the excitement of your story washed over my body. Had i masturbated I would have easily cum. But I am waiting for part 2 next. Brad x