All Comments on 'James and Emma Ch. 01'

This was ridiculous. In no way did it address the issue. William gets to see a freshly fucked Emma... and that's it? How will HR apply this? How will her work collegues be able to see she had received unwanted advances. If nothing else it would have "stoked" William's desire, seeing Emma "glowing" from her fuck. Ridiculous.

Very disappointing!!

Definitely a waste of my time. Gratuitous unnecessary sex.

This piece was meant more to focus on the kinship between this newly-married couple, exemplifying the trust in the relationship and how they worked together to solve this, albeit in an unconventional way. The implied ending is more along the lines of William understands that he cannot possibly try to break up the matrimony of Emma and James and decides to leave them alone but yes, I do, however, understand your frustration in the more implied resolution of the story. Thanks for your feedback anyways

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