All Comments on 'Jamie's First Love'

Interesting story; I'm looking forward to reading more. A couple comments: Megan would not have trusted Jaime to watch her son that quickly and without knowing more about her. Also, you might need a new editor, since he or she doesn't seem to have corrected punctuation or grammar.

This is a great story! Other than being a bit lost in the beginning, I loved it! There was truth in this story without using sex to show true love and feelings. Part 2 really soon I hope!!

I hope you write part 2 soon can wait

I hope you write a part 2! really! this is so amazing!

jus wana say the ending suckd if it is the ending other than that good story and should part 2 so yea good story

I love your characters and the potential this story has. I hate that it's in dire need of an editor. Not for content (much) and not for typos, but for grammar, story flow, and shifting tense.

I think you've got a lot of talent but it's raw. Keep writing and open yourself to being critiqued, I bet you can be a great writer.

write more please!!! is so beautiful story

Oh wow... I truly hope you choose to continue this piece; I love the characters, feelings and overall tone that's been set so far.

please write more

Please finish this. I saw this a while ago and loved it. Saw it again today and still love it. Finiiiiiiiiiiish thiiiiiiis!

You have made a good start. The plot has many ways to go and I really like the characters. Please continue with the story.

Thank you.

Becky

oh no! Please Please complete this story. Im so hooked! You cant just leave it like that. Pls m beggin u.?

I'm drawn to all the characters and like everyone else, hope you finish this heartfelt, and beautifully melancholy story.

You left it hanging!!!! Please, please, please right more.

Love this so far, would like to see more.

Hi B, I feel that there's a lot more to this story, it feels kinda personal to me, in the fact it's not just a story or fiction.

I may be out on a limb here, but I hope and pray that you have found the peace that true love can bring.