All Comments on 'Jane Learns to be a Slut Pt. 01'

Don't bother with Pt. 02.

Not bad. Not great. Potential is there. Proof reading is your friend

I definitely could have been pulled into the story more, but overall it's pretty decent. You don't have to break every taboo at once, pushing past a comfort zone one step at a time is what makes a good story imo