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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Interesting premise.

Terrible story.

One star.

AutonomousWritingAutonomousWritingalmost 2 years agoAuthor

@Anonymous

Thank you for the critique. Any part that I can improve on? Writing style? Grammar? Execution? Appreciate it.

sirhugssirhugsalmost 2 years ago
Weird but interesting

a lot left to the imagination, but that is okay for those of us with imaginations. I just was left hoping for more.

AutonomousWritingAutonomousWritingalmost 2 years agoAuthor

@sirhugs thanks for your feedback. I kinda treated writing sex stories as an exercise, I switched over to writing fiction due to receiving mixed ratings. Although if I'm uhh willing enough I occasionally will write more stories in the future.

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Hello! Thanks for reading the stories I've published so far. I'm using this as a training, although I admit that the stories as well are turning me on when I'm writing it. So it's a double win! Isn't it? Any story which does not really turn me on? I'll throw it away. A sort of...