All Comments on 'Jane Meets Her Valentine'

by rbenne

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H.H.MorantH.H.Morantabout 14 years ago
Really?

You should make sure you call the guy the same name all the way through the story - that, or was this a threesome, and I missed something (a lot)? Rod, or Mike - take your pick, and stick with it.

As to the story itself

Lonely woman gets picked up in a bar, taken home by the guy, and fucked. And she

"...knew that she was going to be seeing a lot of Milke over the months to follow. ..."

Right - getting it on with a guy who picked you up in a bar - and didn't get rid of you until Sunday afternoon is sure proof of eternal love.

Otherwise, a pretty routine stroke story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Mikes, Rod

Story was so-so and I think she meant to say that as Mike pulled or pumped his Rod in and out ect. - or she was thinking of her husband Rod as she was writing the story based on Mike.! Or make up what you believe on how a -Rod got into the story.! LOL Maybe we will see in the next Chapter of Mike strikes back at A - Rod for putting his 6"r in the story.<<<this is fun.! hehe

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Rod or Milke?

I found this error distracting to an other satisfactory story.

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