All Comments on 'Jane's Discovery Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Jane Involved-It's a Start

Good literate first effort. Could be less mechanistic and more inherantly passionate.

Could we have next issue "Jane Developes" please.

If she doen't have the sex appeal -- maybe she could work up a 'specialty'.

gil73

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