All Comments on 'Janet's Suprise'

This story was very sexy and erotic.

The images were painted quite well and evoked a sense of what the girl was feeling.

More attention could have been given to spelling and "realism" though. It is totally unbelievable that she would not recognise her own father's voice.

The part where the blindfold was removed spoiled things a little. It would have been a far better payoff if all the participants were willing and this was merely a role playing game.

That said, I really enjoyed this work and look forward to more.

Hello carl_a,

I really like suspense in this story. Good job, but I think it gives feeling of a little incompletence. Questions like "Why it happened?" rise in mind. I hope for some sequel for some explanation and a proper end of story. :-)

Please keep writing incest story like that one. They are really different from plain formulative incestous stories.

Have a nice day.

ALSM.

You've written another hot one!! Style, intelligence, passion, and eroticism!!! Encore!!

sick and twisted but good as hell i love the way you twist the ending of your stories it makes you want to read more of them "jakk"

And in no way is this story EROTIC except to the equally sick

Why does it seem too much to ask for authors to disclose multiple category content? If this was consentual, it's BDSM. If not, it's Non-Consent/Reluctance. Geez.